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NATATORIAL CHAPTER 7

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Of the entire group, it would be the shy girl standing at the plank divider on the beach, that would powerfully grab your attention. She would be playing with a beach ball like any other youngster and you would place her at about sixteen years of age, although she appeared much more sophisticated and older. Your eyes would be drawn to the beautiful sheen of her strong skin stretched over contours of  shapely muscle just like her mother's. Her thick, golden tresses would try to hide the strange pointy ears, but there was noting that could hide the amazing sky-blue eyes that seem to glow with intelligence and energy. To simply describe her as beautiful, would have been an enormous understatement, like calling the vastness of the oceans a patch of water.  She was the embodiment of gracefulness, athleticism, beauty and femininity.

There was beauty and there was beautiful. Here was something beyond exceptional or exquisite. She was perfection made flesh in all aspects. She was a creative word from the mouth of gods. If you listened closely, you would hear her being called Annelida, and you would not realise that the name came from the names of four people, Annabelle, Belinda, Daniel and Sally.
Even more miraculous it would be for the outside observer when they realise that this inconceivably beautiful young girl was a combination of four different Souls and Essences blended into one extraordinary being from a world beyond their imagination.


Here was a beauty that would drive men mad and throw women into fits of unreasonable jealousy and yet she radiated a humbleness form her every cell and a strange godlike beauty at the same time. When you looked at her, she had an almost magical magnetism about her. You would have the strange urged to want to touch her and be her friend, be near her, love her, being absorbed by her incredible god-like beauty.
You would sense instantly that you were in the presence of something extraordinary.  Close up her unbelievable magnificence was enough to bring tears to your eyes. It was like looking at a divinity, or looking at something so perfect that only gods could have produce it. And if you ever doubted the existence of a Creator, looking at her would quickly have changed your mind…

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It tells the tale of Salacia, a beautiful Mer from the deeps of the ocean and her new human friends, Daniel Baker and his assistant, Belinda, who gets thrown together in a strange web of intrigue and conspiracy which reveals many of the mysteries, myths and legends that has baffled people over the centuries.
Discover the truth about our past, UFO's, aliens, the universe, and the mysterious beings we call mermaids...
It is a tale of betrayal, love and passion.
Beautiful, seductive, feminine and build like goddesses, the mermaids reveal to Daniel and his companion their true reasons for being there and they get drawn into the magical world of the Mers.
They are also in for a number of surprises...

Daniel  and Belinda Chapter 7 of the story. 

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Very beautiful, lovely name and story. Really love this piece, Michelle. :D